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Lori Mattsson Bjorke's avatar

All the makings of a great thriller! I can’t wait to hear what Mr. George wants with … David Lee?

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Jonathan Odell's avatar

Thanks, Lori. I've finished the first draft. I'm going to read it aloud to make sure the rhythm is right. I'll be looking for readers to get feedback on the entire draft. Let me know if you are interested. This goes for other followers as well.

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Lori Mattsson Bjorke's avatar

I’d be honored.

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Kenny Cook's avatar

You know I'm ready for your next novel! 👍

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Jonathan Odell's avatar

I'm hurrying as fast as I can! Thanks for your patience.

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Kenny Cook's avatar

Kenny patiently waits…. 😉

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Joan Mansbach's avatar

Leaving me hanging, tsk tsk. Hope you are planning to deliver more. Love the roach simile in the opening.

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Jonathan Odell's avatar

Well, it's coming together. I just wrote the ending yesterday. So I need to go thru the whole thing again, reading it aloud and editing. Hope to finish while most of us are still livng.

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Pru Selden's avatar

More, please. I am eager to find out what Mr. George wanted with the boy.

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Jonathan Odell's avatar

Thanks, Pru. It's coming. I promise.

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Kevin David Crowley's avatar

So rich and enveloping—wrapped up in another time and place—eager for what’s next in the story.

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Jonathan Odell's avatar

Thanks, Kevin. I love getting your feedback. It really helps.

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