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Joan Mansbach's avatar

Always readable, Jonathan. Your warmth and character clarity, always evident. Sweltering closeness. My kind of phrasing. So ready for this to come together as a novel on my ipad.

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Jonathan Odell's avatar

Thank you, Joan. It's coming together in my head now. Hopefully not too far away from your iPad

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Joan Mansbach's avatar

Get a large coffee and begin the transfer from head to pad to laptop!

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Jonathan Odell's avatar

Exactly what I'm doing now. Of course, moving ahead also means going back and re-editing to layer the story. So what you've seen so far has been altered.

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Pru Selden's avatar

You have a special gift and I could listen to you read all day long❤️

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Jonathan Odell's avatar

Thank you, Pru. I enjoy reading more than I do writing. Unfortunately, I have to write it first! my god, do you realize how long we have known each other?

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Kathleen Remund's avatar

Jonathan, these stories are beautiful. Please keep writing and sharing them.

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Jonathan Odell's avatar

Thanks for he encouragement, Kathleen. I’m hoping it all adds up to a novel

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Kathleen Remund's avatar

It sure has potential!

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Pru Selden's avatar

Yes, it has been a long time🥰

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